I think it's clever, poignant and strangely appropriate to my current reading. It's by Naomi, whose MySpace is here.
Atomic Angels
When I was four
I asked my mother
"Where's God?"
"He's under the chair,"
she said, "everywhere."
So I lifted the cushion
and in the darkness
I saw.
Years later
I'm full
not empty.
If you ask me where to find God
I tell you
"under the chair"
I believe in no God
but feel that if there is one,
It must be everywhere.
I see oaks, churches of canopied ceilings,
green fresco es to make Old Masters weep.
Altars of basalt , cemented with clay,
Bricks, mortar...
all quiver with the song of atomic angels.
Daily bread is coloured tartrazine,
divine blood makes plastic bottles
labelled River Rock.
Relics like rosaries,
fashionable reverbations
of moonstone or common nickel
real holy artefacts
hewn from spirituality itself:
Awareness.
Read a Bible in the cerulean sky
or pensive clouds
of precognitive meteorological forecasts.
Tears litter the inky sky,
blinking eyes of satellites.
Blessed crosses map paths and junctions
life trails of humans
offer salvation
the whole world wide is your Friends List.
As for Darkness,
don't worry.
If there was God
It would live in black holes,
Under The Chair.
You bring the light
lifting the cushions
looking for answers.
Discussing it with me, Naomi wrote "... everything we touch, see and do is miraculous, even the clear plastic of a bottle that was refined from crude oil which was once carbon and biodegraded matter... if we are our own gods by creating miracles through science, those atoms are the spinning angels."
In many ways she's right. We have come so far, especially in Irish society, having been ruled by literal interpretation of the written word of those who used the figure of Jesus for their own power and dominance. We have far more power than ever before.
Yet, with all the scientific breakthroughs, the experiments, the advances and the progress, we still are reliant on things like love, a hug, a friend's company, a smile. The poem echoes my belief - God is where you look for God. Seek and you shall find.
Very nice. I love the ideas and sentiments behind this. The reliance on a 'God' character is still not something I can subscribe to, but I like the idea that there might be a greater force all around us.
ReplyDeleteNot a God reliance Darren: the whole point is that the Earth we live in is miraculous and our religion should be an awareness of the fantastic state of nature that gave us life.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it though :)